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Task 1

 - add more music videos as examples And screenshots 
 -add more detail for each heading, make key words and terminology bold
 - Correct grammar mistakes and use more vocab 

Task 2 
 - add more detail to hip hop and rock genre 
-talk about the link between lyrics and visuals 
- For high D, Explain how meaning is created within each genre 


Task 3
 - compare summer music video with professional music videos
 - include why beat editing is important 
 - use more terminology
- be specific about the use of beat editing, explain how most music videos are dependent on this technique 

 Task 4 - add more about effects and visuals 
           - For higher D, draw comparison and Incorporate Goodwin's theory (Visuals and music) 

- Check spelling and grammar